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Berdasarkan tajuk di atas, mesti anda tertanya-tanya robot apa tu kan???hehe...sebenarnya tu tajuk assignment English sy...ktorg disuruh buat satu esei imaginasi atau imaginative recount...agak lama jgk sy berfikir untuk mencari idea...last2 keluar idea ni...sy rasa imaginasi sy tu menarik, tu la sy nak kongsikan dgn anda semua...sebenarnya ini diadaptasi dari movie tamil yg sy minat sgt....bila tgk movie tu, sy pun berangan la nak buat robot tu...so anda semua baca la ek imaginasi sy kat bwh tu...dlm bahasa inggeris...sy tau ayat sy tu byk salah...confirm lebih dari 10 kesalahan, tp sy tak tau yg mana sy salah...hehehe...sy budak bru belajar...mungkin ada yg ketawa bila baca imaginasi tu, tp sy minta tolong ckit bley tak????klu nak ketawa bley, tp jgn kuat-kuat yerrr~~malu sy nnt...hahaha~~ketawa dlm hati je ek???hihihi~~dan satu lagi sy nak minta tolong...please betulkan apa yg sy salah k???sy lebih suka org tegur kesalahan sy...


ANDRO-HUMANOID ROBOT


In the next thirty year’s from now, if I can achieved it, I want to create a robot that can perform all human duties. I want to create an Andro-Humanoid Robot. It looks like human. There is no difference between the robot and human from the outside look. Human also can’t differentiate between the robot and human.

This robot can perform like humans. It can do all the human activities. This robot can make my life easier. Duties like cleaning the house also can be done by the robot. It can cook, washing dishes and clothes. There’s no need a servant anymore. This robot thinks like human because feeling’s hormones is inserted to the robot, so that it have a feelings like humanity, anger, happy, love, sad and all the feeling like human does. But the side effect is, if the robot fall in love with the particular person, the person is in trouble. Beware!!!

Moreover, this robot also protect human from danger, for example it can protect from the kidnapper’s. It also can help people that trap in the fire because it can stand for higher temperature until 1000 degree celcius. The special characteristics in this robot that I like the most is, this robot just scanning the pages of the books. By scanning, the robot know all the content’s of the books. It just took a second to complete it. So, I doesn’t need to read the books. Just let the robot do it, then it can tell me what the content of the books!!! It’s amazing right? Of course it can help me during exam, but not to cheating. The robot can read my books on behalf of me, then it can teach me. Another features of the robot is, it can sing!!! So it can entertain me when I’m getting bored.

If I can make this robot, just imagine how’s my life would be. It must be interesting right? The most important thing right now is, I must study hard to be a great scientist!!! If I can’t make the Andro-Humanoid Robot, just let it be an imagination in my life. Maybe one day, my grandchildren would create it.

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Nazreen Zainul said...
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Nazreen Zainul said...

Hi. Below are some the mistakes that I have corrected based on your essay. However,these are just grammatical errors, I didn't touch on your points.

Thirty years from now, if I can achieve it, I want to create a robot that can perform all human duties. I want to create an Andro-Humanoid Robot. It looks like a human. There is no difference between the robot and a human from the outside. Human also can’t differentiate between the robot and a human.

This robot can perform many tasks like humans. It can do all human activities. This robot can make my life easier. Duty like cleaning the house also can be done by the robot. It can cook, wash dishes and clothes. There’s no need for a servant anymore. This robot thinks like a human because feeling hormones are inserted into the robot, so that it has feelings like humanity, anger, happy, love, sad and all the feelings like humans do. But the side effect is, if the robot fall in love with the particular person, the person is in trouble. Beware!!!

Moreover, this robot also protects humans from danger, for example it can protect people from kidnappers. It also can help people that are trapped in the fire because it can withstand high temperature up to 1000 degree celcius. The special characteristic in this robot that I like the most is, this robot can scan all the pages of a book. By scanning, the robot knows all the contents of the book. It just takes a second to complete it. So, I don’t need to read the book. Just let the robot to do it, then it can tell me what are the contents of the book!!! It’s amazing right? Of course it can help me during exam, but not cheating. The robot can read my books on behalf of me, then it can teach me. Another feature of the robot is, it can sing!!! So it can entertain me when I’m bored.

If I can make this robot, just imagine how my life would be. It must be interesting right? The most important thing right now is, I must study hard to be a great scientist!!! If I can’t make the Andro-Humanoid Robot, just let it be an imagination in my life. Maybe one day, my grandchildren would create it.

sweetgirl91 said...

thank you so much cikgu nazreen!!! hihihi...nnt sy tukar ayat sy dgn apa yg awk bg kat atas tu..thanks a lot...ni yg best ni bila ada kwn yg terror BI...hihi..thanks again and I really appreciate it...